2015年6月英语四级作文范文及思路点评：人与电脑

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备受嘱目的2015年6月英语四级作文在同学们的千呼万唤中和大家见面了，今年的考查形式还是延续以往的风格——以图画的形式来考查大家。由于考试是以花卷形式呈现，所以涉及到多个话题，其中包括父母对孩子成长的影响，手机对人生活的影响，电脑对人生活的影响。其中第三个话题关于电脑的影响文都老师在考前就给大家作过权威的预测。相信听过课的同学在完成这个作文时心里是有底的。

关于人与电脑这个话题，我们在谋篇构局的时候，可以按三段去写，开头部分一定要对图片进行描述，然后在中间段落展开（注意：本次图画侧重的是负面影响），也可以从正反两个方面进行对比分析。在行文时，要注意文章的层次和逻辑梳理。

【参考范文】

首段：As is clearly depicted from a series of cartoons that a man is excessively dependent on the computer whether in working and playing or at home and sleeping. The impact of the computer on daily life is such seriousness that it is high time we paid attention to it.

展开段：In the first place, due to the wide application of the computer, some people called net friends always take priority over our family and friends in real life. The bulk of each day including our time and energy is spent on the Internet. What’s more, the Internet deprives us of the delight in communication with others. When taking to someone by us, we can hear their voices, see their expressions, and even hold their hands if we would like to. Last but not least, the computer will lead to a decline of our skills of face-to-face communication. Thus we may feel embarrassed and find it harder to communicate with people around us.

结论段：To sum up, we shouldn’t be dependent on the computer excessively. No matter how convenient and speedy it is, we should remember the advantage of face-to-face communication.