2013年英语二大作文解析：语句精彩者得高分

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1月5日下午，完美·体育(中国)官方网站,WANMEI SPORTS英语考试如期进行，写作Part B部分，可能是考生和各位辅导老师讨论最热烈的部分。英语（二）的图画写作，较往年试题相比简单了很多，这种作文似乎更像是四六级话题作文，所以同学们写起来肯定有话可说，甚至是脑子里有很多相关的资料，可以信手拈来，只不过做个对比，看哪个句子结构更两点更精彩就选择哪句话。

大家也要谨慎一些如果只是机械性的将四、六级脑海中残存的一些内容搬过来，也只能得到一半左右的分数。要注意审题，题目中图片的大概意思是：大学生从大一到大三从事兼职的人数呈现缓慢增长的趋势，而大四阶段却急速增长。第二段应该透过现象解释原因，至少分两方面：第一，为何大一到大三从事兼职的人数缓慢增长；第二，为何大四从事兼职学生的数量激增。最后一段分析这种现象是否符合客观规律。
 
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In the bar chart, it shows the changes of the proportion of the students having part-time jobs during the four years’ study in college. The proportion increases slightly from the first year to the third year, however, the fourth year has witnessed a fast increase, surging to 88.24%.
There is no denying that this trend is very pervasive in current colleges and in a certain degree is quite proper. To begin with, when students in their first year in college, their major job is to study, not to work. They have to lay a profound knowledge base so that they make a good preparation for future work. What’s more, when students are going to step out of school and enter into the society, they have to know lots of experience , for example, how to deal with challenges outside, so they need to have some part-time jobs. Clearly, doing a part time job has many advantages. Students can learn how to get along well with others and know the society more profoundly. Secondly, to take a part-time job provides the students with a valuable opportunity to put what he has learned from books into practice. Finally, students can make some money, which helps to unload their families’financial burden.
Due to the analysis above, to be an eligible heir of socialism construction, you have to strike a balance between your study and the job. Study is your major task while a part time job is a minor one though work experience is desirable.