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现在已经进入了完美·体育(中国)官方网站,WANMEI SPORTS倒计时阶段，目前提升速度最为明显的还是写作部分。之前卞老师和大家分享的是大作文第三段写作要素，今天依然和大家继续谈谈第三段的写作要点。

第三段结尾部分是整篇文章的总结部分，对于全文来说有点睛和提分的作用。框架也分为负向文章行文思路与正向文章行文思路两大类。上次和大家分享的是负向文章思路，本次卞老师给大家分析积极正面的文章行文思路。

我们先以2001年完美·体育(中国)官方网站,WANMEI SPORTS英语完美·体育(中国)官方网站,WANMEI SPORTS为例。在2001年“爱心是一盏灯，在越黑暗的地方越明亮”的写作题目中，范文的结束段是这样来进行的：

It is my view that the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are. We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers. Only by doing so can we help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines.

这是作文的第三段。在这个段落中，作者在此明确了自己的观点：表示爱心的最好方式是帮助比我们更加不幸的人。同时作者又给出了自己的建议，希望每个人都随时准备向有困难的人伸出援助之手。

上面的例子是一个关于正面的话题，这是围绕“爱心”展开的。因此，在这一段中，首先需要去弘扬这种美德，或者现象。在第三段的第一句，重申论点是非常有必要的。例如这句话“It is my view that the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are”，为了使我们的社会更加美好，这样积极正面的例子是我们每一个人都要效仿并学习的。在第三段的第二句中，需要表明“当前社会的确很需要这种正能量或者这种积极正面的行为”。正如第一个例子中的这句话“we should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers”，范文中再次表明社会中的每个人都应该随时做好准备去帮助其他人。无论是作为我们的家人，还是陌生人，我们都不应该见他人有难而视而不见。在第三段的第三句中，文章应该“对未来的憧憬或者期待”进行表述。例如，“Only by doing so can we help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines”，针对这种正面行为或现象，如果一直保持着这种正能量，社会将会变得更美好，爱心的光将照亮悲伤的阴影。

下面卞老师给大家总结一下积极正向文章整体的写作思路。

正向文章行文思路 (积极倡导)：

( Confidence ) is partially the driving force behind the evolution/growth of our society. And all hands are supposed to join together to (foster people’s confidence).

1、社会层面

(1)媒体传递正能量media

The mass media should exert more positive energy, such as being confidence, to the public so that people would react more positively to difficulties and adversities.

(2)教育education

Education, affects people’s attitude and reaction to the world. Thus, moral education should be enhanced and concentrated on juveniles and kids before they enter their adulthood. Specifically, self-discipline and code of social conduct should be written in books and carefully discussed in class.

(3)学校college

College is where undergraduates obtain knowledge and skills to enhance their academic performance and where students get their personality and code of social conduct improved as well. Thus, moral course of moral education should be provided as elective curriculums to college students.

curriculum 校内课程

extra curriculum课外活动

electives n选修课 elective curriculums

2、个人层面

(1)改善自我

①Reading books. We can devote some of our leisure to cultivating a love of reading books. You will find what you cannot get in reality but in books, such as companion, answers to tough questions, etiquette as well as mental power etc.

such as +N/doing

for example,+句子

②Exercising. Polls conducted online says, taking part into sports would improve your mentality, personality and strengthen your weak point. Your will find yourself more assertive and decisive after one year of group exercising.

find oneself +adj

find oneself +doing sth

③+给予他们时间成长Of course, we cannot grow to be (a confident person) overnight if we were not, therefore, we should allow ourselves to take baby steps to learn it.

(2)志愿工作voluntary work

It is highly recommended that people should participate in voluntary work. During the process, you would get your mind purified, moral consciousness boosted, and social responsibilities strengthened. You would like to join hands with your peers or colleagues to proceed with your task.

以上是卞老师给大家总结的大作文第三段积极正面文章的写作思路，大家也需要不间断的训练和积累素材。在这里卞老师提前祝大家金榜题名。