2015年英语一大作文

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Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following picture. In your essay,
you should

1) describe the picture briefly,

2) interpret its intended meaning, and

3) give your comments.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

对于大作文而言，审题比小作文简单。一般情况下，大作文的提纲部分都是相同的：1) describe the picture briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments，也就是说，1)简述图画， 2) 阐释寓意;3)个人评论。然而，每年的图片的寓意却是不相同的，这就是各位考生审题的关键。在大作文中，需要强调的一点是：不涉及文章的立意。在研委会给出的大作文的评分标准为内容完整，组织连贯，语言准确，语言多样，其中，没有任何一条是涉及到“立意”的。因此，各位考生不需要在文章立意上花费过多的时间。

It is an interesting picture, with deep implication. As the picture unveils, several friends are having a dinner party, which successfully draws our attention. When we watch it closely, it is obvious that each of them is checking messages in their mobile phones without saying a word, leaving the dishes untouched. Definitely, the subtly conveyed implication that as friends we should have more communication by talking instead of by sending messages deserves our further consideration.
Here are some reasons that might account for this issue. To begin with, the mobile phone has affected our daily life. With increasing pace of technology development, more and more people have spent much of their time staring at the screen and lacked many opportunities of communicating with each other face to face. If you regard my analysis reasonable, I will share another reason with you. It is universally believed that the young people have failed to realize the significance of communicating face to face, and their attention has been distracted by the novel electronic equipment.

According to the analysis above, it is high time that we should take steps to resolve this problem. And the society should advocate the young men to put aside the phone and enhance the communication of friends face to face. I hope the serious condition will be eased in the near future.

通过范文，我们可以得出这篇文章的写作思路：①直观评价，整体描述，细节描述，过渡句;②关键句，具体原因，总结句;③关键句，具体建议，结尾句。

在语言上，我们可以积累一些比较优美的句子。比如：①It is an interesting picture, with deep implication.(定语后置)② As the picture unveils, 整体描述, which successfully draws our attention. (as 和which引导的两个非限制性定语从句)③ When we watch it closely, it is obvious that 细节描述. (when引导的时间状语从句，it作形式主语句型)④ Definitely, the subtly conveyed implication that 寓意deserves our further consideration.(单个副词做状语，that引导的同位语从句) ⑤ Here are some reasons that might account for this issue.(定语从句，account for来代替explain)。

希望这接下来的时间里，各位考生能够好好复习，认真备课。

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(本文作者为辅导名师——陈文倩)